Comments on: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/ The Premiere Urban Relationship Blog Online Sat, 21 Nov 2009 04:32:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.1 hourly 1 By: gsone http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-16099 gsone Fri, 29 May 2009 11:48:38 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-16099 yo homie that stories the shyt..was really feeling it... lemme know when u ready to release the book im definitely gonna cop this. yo homie that stories the shyt..was really feeling it… lemme know when u ready to release the book im definitely gonna cop this.

]]> By: DaKing http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2743 DaKing Tue, 24 Feb 2009 03:16:14 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2743 it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job. it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.

]]> By: DomiMami http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2740 DomiMami Mon, 23 Feb 2009 22:55:29 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2740 Dope. <br>Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....<br>That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth. <br>And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)<br>Keep up the good work Xilla Dope.
Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother….
That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
And…and…and…. maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO….I KID. (ok, well….Only halfway kidding)
Keep up the good work Xilla

]]> By: Thoney Gangstasweet http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2739 Thoney Gangstasweet Mon, 23 Feb 2009 11:57:25 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2739 this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW! this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!

]]> By: Britt Bri http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2737 Britt Bri Mon, 23 Feb 2009 08:26:08 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2737 FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?<br><br>THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br>VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF! FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY DETAILED…BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE… THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!

]]> By: Niced http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2735 Niced Sun, 22 Feb 2009 08:08:43 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2735 My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up? My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?

]]> By: bfount http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2734 bfount Sun, 22 Feb 2009 02:56:42 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2734 I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next.... I am definitely not a fan of the “to be continued…”, so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next….

]]> By: Breezy http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2732 Breezy Sat, 21 Feb 2009 22:32:06 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2732 Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..<br>you are really big on details and are hella graphic!<br> ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl.. Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
… a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..

]]> By: DaRuler http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2731 DaRuler Sat, 21 Feb 2009 07:14:00 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2731 the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad... the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight… who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad…

]]> By: ias http://blogxilla.com/blog3/2009/02/20/blogxilla-presents-its-going-down-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-2730 ias Sat, 21 Feb 2009 05:22:14 +0000 http://blogxilla.com/blog3/?p=4397#comment-2730 intense i like it =] intense i like it =]

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