BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

“Damn, you look sexy ass hell! Hurry up and get ready we got things to do, places to go baby! Top of the world.” When she got out of the bathroom she walked into her room, only to see 50 dozen roses laid out all over the room, roses were everywhere, on the bed, on the dresser, on the floor, on the window seal she almost started to cry but she didn’t want to mess up her makeup so she sucked it up and started to get ready.

Rock was in the living room thinking of even more surprises as he puff on a L, he planned on having candles lit and jazz music playing in the background, w/ the show him and Jazzy planned to put on what other type of music would fit the mood, but this was no regular Mix of songs he had a DJ friend of his put together a mix of the best John Coltrane, Miles Davis, Winston Marseilles mixed in w/ TAGS a subtle reminder of what had happened and what was about to go down!

Jennifer put on her Clothes, picked up and back and almost ran out of the shop, Amir asked “What’s wrong? Why the rush I was hoping we could spend some quality time together tonight, maybe catch a movie and dinner.” She explained that she had plans and since he seemed to play into the freakiness of her life she told him she had to meet up w/ her home girl Jazzy. Truth be told Jennifer had no plans whatsoever, she just didn’t want to be around tonight, or anymore as that matter. As she walked out the door she explained to him that she would see him later, little did either of them know that later would come sooner than expected. Amir locked up and headed home, when his phone rang again it was his mother, RJ was sick and she needed Amir to stop by Walgreens to pick up some Tussin, so he could get to sleep. When Amir got to his mother’s house Mama insisted that he have a bite to eat. At first he refused, but after smelling those baked turkey wings and home made macaroni and cheese she couldn’t help but stay, nothing follows some good loving that a home cooked meal.

Rock sat in the living room thinking about how all this went down, how this specially crafted plan came to life. He was so jealous and so possessive that his rage got the best of him and now he was about to murder 2 people. 3 in all there was no way he could trust Jazzy, to him she was guilty just for touching his girl, at first he enjoyed the show but he saw how Tasha looked at her and how she moaned when she touched her, and that was to much for Rock’s bruised ego to handle to he added a little twist to his plan. Tasha walked out of the room breaking Rock out of his thoughts; he jumped up, walked over to Tasha and gave her a huge kiss, they walked out side of the house. When they got outside Tasha saw a huge White stretch Navigator parked outside, Rock had pulled out all the stops she was sure he was going to pop the question now, they went out to the nicest restaurant in town had dinner, talked and had drinks she was a little tipsy and told Rock she was ready to go, that when Rock picked up the phone and called Jazzy. “Hey Jazzy met me at the house in 20 minutes,” they exchanged more words and he hung up the phone. “Jazzy said she has something for you a special toy that she wants you to wear.”

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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