BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

“Why would I know anything about TAGS?” Amir Said W/ a mouth full of Bourbon Chicken.

“I figured you knew him since you gave me those backstage passes a few month ago, I just wanted to have something to talk about when I go to the Hair salon, those bitches in there are going to be talking up a storm and I wanted to trump whatever they have to say w/ some inside information” Tasha lied. ” How did you get those tickets anyway?”

“well one of my clients Jennifer kind of has a crush on me, she invited me to one of his shows but last minute she had to pull out so she gave me the passes instead. I was only going to get the pussy So, I gave you the tickets. Beside what I look like backstage at a Reggae concert w/ another dude!!! Now if it was a Presidential debate I would have been there w/ bells on” They Both Laughed. Dead Prez Blasted from underneath the table. Amir Picked up his phone, “Speaking of the devil. Hey Jennifer wassup” They spoke briefly and Amir Hung up “Hey Tash, It’s your lucky day She left something at my Shop I’ll see if i can “pump” her for some information and I’ll call you if I find out anything.”

“Yea, you do that I got to run for my appointment Rock’s taking me out tonight” She lifted up her bags “Don’t forget”

Rock was in the house, on the computer, Tag’s New single playing. He was staring at Tags myspace page Ass naked ready to get in the shower. He closed the browser and went to pick up his phone. “Hello Jazzy be here tonight around 10 it’s all going down tonight.” Jazzy was Tags road manager and one of the many females Tags had at his disposal. When Rock found out about the affair he logged onto no other than MYSPACE and sent a nasty ass message about how tags had fucked his girl and how he would beat his ass, for some reason he thought TAGS did his own site, little did he know Jazzy was the one who ran the page. Luckily for him she was not only the person who ran his webpage but she was his live in Girlfriend who always suspected Tags was cheating but never had the proof until Rock sent her that message they met a few times for lunch, started liking each other and devised a plan for revenge. Jazzy was smart to cover her tracks, she took her computer to a shop to get cleaned of all cookies and files that may be used against her in a court of law. “I’ll be there at 9:30 baby! I just have to stop over my friends and pick up something I forgot there earlier” They Hung up.

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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