BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

The Barber Shop was Packed, Rocked hopped right in the chair the extra 20 bucks paid off on days like this. Gifted Cutter had the best barbers in town. They had a 60 inch Plasma on each wall and like in any hood BET was on, they were playing a tribute to TAGS his videos played on every wall Rocked smiled proud of his work, the body falling to the floor, the blood splattering all over the pavement, the bullet going in one side of his head and coming out the other, He was down right cheesing and he got away w/ it, right now his boy was somewhere in North Carolina hiding the gun someplace no one would ever find it. Only 3 People knew about it and after tonight only 2 would know and Rock liked those Odds.

“Yo you this my song” a young kid “Ya Gurl Taste Mi Swalla Mi No Waste Mi”

“Shut the fuck up” Rock Screamed “for I tell Deuce to give you a Sherman Helmsley” Everyone laughed.

“Whatever Nigga you just mad b/c Tags was fucking everything in the hood, Ya Big ass head, Your head so big you look like The Head Detective and Tisha Campbell’s Love Child he probably fuck your GIRL!!!”

Rock shut his mouth gave dude a nod and let him get that. When the barber was done Rock got out the chair… Walked over to the kid, and Clocked him, it looked like a old School Tyson fight. The kid feel faster than Mitch Green did, Rock stomped him repeatedly Blood was everywhere… And then He walked out of the Barber shop.

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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