BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

Tasha was in heaven and hell both at the same time, Heaven b/c her man loved her again sent her on a shopping spree to get whatever she wanted. Hell b/c she wanted to know more about how Tags got killed. She was on her way to the mall and she knew just the person to pump information from. She called him up, “Hey Sorry about earlier why don’t you meet me at the mall and we can have lunch together… Cool see you there.”

Rock already at the mall, Macy’s to be exact he was in the men’s section looking at designer 3 piece suits when a saleswoman approached him. “Can I help you” He almost had a heart attack “Damn Baby you almost got knocked the hell out, you can’t be sneaking up on people like that” The 18 year old Blonde hair blue eyed sales woman laughed, Rock join in. “I Guess that’s in style huh” He said. “No those are last year’s suits I can show you the ones we just got in”

“I was talking about White Girls w/ Big Butts”

She turned redder than an apple her ass was shaped like. “You’re in Style sweetie I can show you the what would look real nice on you”

“I already know that. YOU” He said licking his lips

She licked her in return “Follow me, We just got these today” She pulled out a tape measure took his measurements purposely touching his neck and Then grazing her hand over his dick and then directed him to the dressing room.

Once inside he told her to lock the door, she obeyed he tried on the suit and she told him how good he looked he suggested she help him out of it… So she agreed Unbutton each button w/ care and hung the clothes up neatly she kneeled down undid his pants pulled his dick out of his boxers and and placed it in her mouth she took him in her mouth and swallowed it w/ ease She placed a string of saliva down the length of his cock played games w/ her tongue her version of tag and no matter where his dick hid in her mouth her tongue was going to find it and tag it…and let him feel the inside of his throat moved her hands along w/ the movements of her jaw she wanted him to cum in her mouth, Rock felt the eruption about to happen he leaned back against the wall to brace himself and just when he did his phone Chirped, it was Tasha “Hey baby I’m at the mall” He stepped back and the Clerk fell backwards against the wall in the fitting room hitting her head. He explained he had to go and so asked how much the suit was “2,000 dollars” she said rubbing her head. he handed her 22 hundred dollar bills and told her to keep the change he picked up his suit and walked out of the fitting room. As soon as he turned the corner Tasha was right there, when she saw him she gave him a bug hug and a kiss. The Sales Clerk sucked her teach so loud Tasha heard it “SMCH nothing bitch don’t make me come over there and slap the taste out of your mouth” Rock grabbed her hand and walked into the MALL.

They shopped together she picked up a pair of Louie pumps w/ a matching dress, new MAC make up and later she was going to get a brand new Yakki weave sewn into her scalp. Rock told her he was about to head out to get his hair cut, He kissed passionately told her he couldn’t wait for tonight and how it was going to be a night she never forgot and then they parted ways.

As soon as he left Tasha ran to the Food Court to met her lunch date. Amir was standing at the Panda Express ordering the Bourbon Chicken and the 2 sides, “Hey Sis took you long enough”

“Sorry I got caught up w/ your brother you know how he gets all about the PDA’s Anyway did you hear anything about Tags?”

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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