BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

THE AROMA OF CHEESE GRITS , TURKEY BACON AND SCRAMBLED EGGS CAME FROM THE KITCHEN AS IT AWOKE TASHA. THE NIGHT BEFORE SHE HAS BEEN MADE LOVE TO BY HER MAN; SHE THOUGHT IT WAS A SIGN OF THE GOOD THINGS TO COME. HER HEART DROPPED AS THE DOOR OPEN “BABY YOU SCARED ME” SHE SAID AS SHE LOOKED AT THE PLATE OF FRESH FOOD ON THE TRAY. “HEY BOO SORRY ABOUT THAT, I HAVE A BIG DAY PLANNED FOR US, SO PUT ON YOUR BEST OUTFIT, GO GET YOUR HAIR DONE DO WHATEVER YOU GOT TO DO BUT LOOK FLY!!! WE BALLING TONIGHT! I ARRANGED TO HAVE MY MOMMY WATCH LITTLE RJ SO WE GOT THE NIGHT TO OURSELVES AND MAMA FROM THE OTHER NIGHT IS COMING OVER SO WE GOING TO HAVE FUN”

A big smile came on Tasha’s face, she was very excited, had she finally made him realize that she was sorry for what she had done, she truly loved him and wanted them to spend the rest of their lives together. She wondered if he was going to pop the question. Why else would he be being so nice, but her insides warmed up when he mentioned HER. She was so excited she could still taste her. She had thought to herself of ways to get in touch w/ the 3rd partner in there 3some for some one on one time, but the time wasn’t right. She secretly fantasized about what it would be like to taste her again or for the woman to taste her. Their soft skin caressing one another. The Phone rang, It was Rock’s brother Amir, calling to tell Tasha to turn on the news the president was about to speak before the UN in about 20 minutes to plead his case for another war in the middle east. They were both so-called geeks and it amazed Tasha how Amir was so smart and well polished as Rock was nothing more than a thug who worked only as a front for his “dealings”. Amir went on to ask about the baby and other things before asking to speak to his brother, once she handing Rock the phone she turned on the news. “Damn ROCK these Grits Good as HELL!!!” she yelled into the other room.

THE BODY OF UP AND COMING REGGAE SINGER TAGS WAS FOUND SLAIN LAST NIGHT…. POLICE HAVE NO WITNESSES BUT BELEIVE IT MAY HAVE BEEN A RIVAL BETWEEN GANGS… Her mind raced should she tell Rock? He was being so nice to her lately and she didn’t want him to go back to the depressed self he was when he found out about TAGS. She just has to find out more information on what happened to him. Finishing up her breakfast she watched the report of speech, he made his case for an illegal war, she was so infuriated by the lies being spat from the TV, that she almost knocked over her bowl of grits. Suddenly secret service runs on stage and pulls the president off the stage. The News cuts to anchorman Jeff GoldBloom who gives a report that the Prince of the Middle East has just been shot and murdered and the President is being Rushed to Air-Force 1 for safety. She runs out of the bedroom door only to bump into Rock who was coming in to hand her the phone, “Here Amir wants to talk to you, hey sweetie I’m going to my Mother’s house to drop of some clothes for RJ and then I’m going shopping I’ll be back around 5 be ready b/c it’s on tonight.” He kisses her on the cheek.

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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