BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

“Don’t worry about that I got you” his dick was still hard getting harder as the blood ran down Tasha head. he continued to fuck Jazzy right next to Tasha’s unconscious body. The Door bell rung. the fucking stopped it rang again and again after at least 20 times his phone chirped “Yo Rock this Amir I need your sons blanket open the door” Rock put on his pants and went to get the blanket. When he got to the door he opened it slowly cracking it to hand his brother the blue blanket. Amir looked inside not b/c he liked his newphews mother more out of a force of habit. He looked inside he almost Snapped.

“Jennifer what the fuck you doing over here? And where the fuck is Tasha at?” Amir yelled never bothering to look on the floor behind the couch

“Jennifer? Bitch I thought your Name was Jazzy” Rock said “I’m going to kill your stanking ass” Rock reached for his waist only to remember his gun was next to Tasha’s body.

Jazzy started to panic she tried to say something but she was froze she never thought she would get caught she thought she could just disappear w/ the 20 grand Rock promised her.

“I thought Jazzy was your girl! Bitch after my brother kills you I’m going to kill yo ass again” Rock walked over to Jazzy and Back Smacked her knocking her to the floor, Amir and Rock took turns kicking her Rock lifted his leg and Stomped her right in her stomach. Jazzy felt her Rib crack, blood came out of her mouth. Amir got ready to do the same as Rock went to get the gun to finish the bitch.

As Rock got the the body he looked at her lying face down on the floor as he went to roll her over to get his gun he thought about how much he loved her. When her body rolled over Tasha pointed the gun right at Rock and put a bullet right in his head!! BAM Rock dropped to the ground. Amir spun around startled from the gun shot when he realized she just killed his brother he charged Tasha. She emptied the clip into his chest and stomach. Amir’s limp body fell on top of his brother. Tasha walked over to Jazzy who laid blooded and naked on the floor.

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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