BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Posted in Rated Grown Up on Feb 20, 2009

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Since a lot of you ask me to write a book, and one of my new readers asked for the rest of this story. I decided to post the complete series of a short story I wrote about a couple of years ago. Warning… there will be typo’s and grammatical errors in this rough draft, but your opinion is appreciated.

“There he go right there!” The black SUV pulled up slowly, lights off, gunshots fired, Raheem fell to the ground like a brick out of hell. Tires screeched, as Rock pulled the still lit joint out of the ashtray inhaled and blasted Ready To Die by the Notorious B.I.G. He has just killed a man, and it was easier than he thought it would be. He knew he wanted revenge on Raheem for fucking his baby mother but he didn’t think it would feel this good to see his flesh ripped open from bullets, to see his skull leaking cherry kool-aid colored substance all over the ground.

“Yo, Let me out right here” He dapped his boy and got out of the vehicle, visions of the body dropping to the floor replayed over and over in his mind. It replaced the visions of his baby mother deepthroating the reggae singer which too haunted him ever since he read it in her journal, and found the condom in the trash months ago. Sure they stayed together what was he suppose to do, she apologize a million times, did everything she stop doing before she started messing around w/ the semi-celebrity. He let it slide but it was only apart of his plan.

He walked into the store bought a bag of Sour cream and Cheddar chips, a Snapple apple and some horny goat weed as walked the rest of the way home. When he got in the door, he heard Ne-yo coming from the bathroom’s closed door, no need to knock, he walked right inside only to see his baby mother doing herself w/ an 8 inch dildo his dick got brick hard within a millisecond.

“Thinking about me huh” he said

“I knew you would be home soon and I wanted to warm up for you” She said. She was 5-5 and had an ass like Ki-Toy, Chest people paid for, and a face that would put Stacy Dash to shame. Roc ripped off his clothes eager to give her the fucking of her life. His sculpted chest tight abs and Hulk Hogan arms grabbed the back of her head as he guided her head to his dick. She shook his hand off her head Grabbed his cock w/ her right hand licked the shaft rotated her tongue over the head of his dick and deep throated him using her hand to give him more pleasure. His head dropped back as he let out a chorus of ohhh’s and ahhh’s he fucked her face, she spoke barely audible demands w/ a mouthful dick in her mouth begging him to let her taste him. He Reached behind and grabbed the towel and threw it at her “dry off met me in the bedroom when your done” he said coldly, she thought it was all apart of the game as he walked out of the bathroom ass naked.

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  • lisa
    damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!
  • Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!
  • HeadMistress
    Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

    Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

    Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???
  • Jasmine_Fern
    Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.
  • Shaunda
    That was great!!! I loved it!!
  • KueenluvlyA
    i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)
  • sexyma078
    Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!
  • lisa
    well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.
  • ias
    intense i like it =]
  • the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...
  • Breezy
    Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
    you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
    ... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..
  • bfount
    I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....
  • Niced
    My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?
  • FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

    THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!
  • Thoney Gangstasweet
    this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!
  • DomiMami
    Dope.
    Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
    That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
    And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
    Keep up the good work Xilla
  • DaKing
    it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.
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